The first part is done. It goes...

"Deee de de de de deeeee
dum dee dee de de deeee
dah DEEEE dum dee de de"

Then I think it should have a bridge but I'm not sure.

It goes on ...

"DEEE de de de dah DEeah.
De de de duh de de DeEEEE."

So what do you think?

I'm having trouble with the rest... Any ideas?

:expectant:

 

You need something powerful in there to like this.

BA-Num, ba ba ba ba BA-Num
ba ba ba ba
BA
BA
BA
BA-Num


I think that would be most suitable.

 

Have you thought of interspersing it with a few "chaaaaa"s ??

I feel that the "deee"s, and "da"s could do with being broken up a little ....... just a thought, hope this helps .....

 

What about a drum solo?



Thud

 

No... you guys are right! ABSOLUTELY RIGHT!!!

I don't know what I was thinking.... who was going to sing this drek? Perry Como? Right you are .... interpose some BA-Num, ba a ba ba BA-Num ba ba ba ba and some chaaaaas and were workin' baby

WE ARE WORKIN'


Keep it comin'

Yeah!!!

 

We need someone to cover the air guitar with some Waaaawa wa wa wa wa waaaaawa's.

Groovy baby, were rock 's now.

 

Okay... I'm getting this down. This is REALLY GOOD stuff!

 

I'm just realizing how hard it is to put sounds into words.

 

Well get busy Luke and help us out.

 

I think in deference to today's rock, you need a few harsh screams in there, which are not type-able.

:listens to screams in her head:

:nods:

Yep, that adds some interest.