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From: All up in your inner tubes. Whatcha gonna do sucka?
well, fawk you guys. 
considering it was a rushed draft that I did in 2 hours, I'm not too concerned. I redid a few things before turning it in, but you guys probably won't give two shits to read the final draft.
this isn't a major paper. this was just a simple homework assignment (as opposed to one of the 3 remaining papers this semester which make up a more substantial part of my grade, the first of which I got an A on)
considering it was a rushed draft that I did in 2 hours, I'm not too concerned. I redid a few things before turning it in, but you guys probably won't give two shits to read the final draft.
this isn't a major paper. this was just a simple homework assignment (as opposed to one of the 3 remaining papers this semester which make up a more substantial part of my grade, the first of which I got an A on)
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From: All up in your inner tubes. Whatcha gonna do sucka?
Originally Posted by magician,Sep 25 2009, 10:40 AM
If I were grading this "paper", I'd give it an F for this error alone:
. . . he and I share . . . .
. . . he and I share . . . .
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From: All up in your inner tubes. Whatcha gonna do sucka?
Originally Posted by C U AT 9K,Sep 25 2009, 04:29 PM
do you find being high helps you write?
its not until I sober up when I realize grammatical errors and whatnot.
but when I'm riding the white horse, I can't write for shit.... I get ideas, but none of them want to come out
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Originally Posted by senor_flojo,Sep 25 2009, 02:31 PM
but when I'm riding the white horse, I can't write for shit.... I get ideas, but none of them want to come out
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From: All up in your inner tubes. Whatcha gonna do sucka?
Originally Posted by 8D_In_Trunk,Sep 25 2009, 04:45 PM
I'll read the final copy. **** it.
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From: All up in your inner tubes. Whatcha gonna do sucka?
Originally Posted by simon122,Sep 24 2009, 10:53 PM
i think you should compare and contrast yourself with the dude's character and qualities rather than just what situations he was involved in.
i'm sure you can be a bit deeper than you were in this draft. the dude is a cool character though -- good choice!
i'm sure you can be a bit deeper than you were in this draft. the dude is a cool character though -- good choice!
