pretty funny....stand still!

 

good job, you got balls

 

nice bit on pooping, lol

 

You sound like a mix between Dane Cook and Nick Swardson. Two of my favorite comedians.

I'll listen to the rest later. So far so good!

 

Pretty good job for your first time. You seemed relaxed... I would get material that doesn't have such a long "set up".

 

Nice work, don't give up. You are much better than a few podcasts i have downloaded where it sounded like there weren't even a crowd.

Maybe get the crowd involved somehow. The two stand up comedies that i've been to, i got picked on (sitting in front row for both).
One of them was at Russell Peters where he was warming up at the start, and i was staring at a scratching dj he had in the background, he then pointed out why i'm so sad, and asked is it because i miss the game called DDR? It didnt link well, but he went on his joke about that dancing game. It made everyone pretend to laugh when it weren't funny so they wouldn't get picked on like me. lol

 

lol that was funny.... the story with yer 2 friends sounds so freakin funny I can so picture that! Except i didnt know what yuou said when you screamed into the mic for the punchline.

2 thumbs tho

 

he said mind freak

 

good job for your first time! i enjoyed it.

 

it was great, i think you'll get more comfortable on stage with time