Very Nice

 

backgrounds, way too cluttered.

 

Hi Nfty, I notice a lot of views and few comments. Let me try to help you a bit. Overall watch your compositions. Your backgrounds are busy and your examples posted tend to center your subject in the center of the frame. Try to study and incorporate the rule of thirds into your shooting. Some pics of your model look like a standard snapshot, try engaging the model getting some smiles and expressions from her and shooting in closer. she is barely looking at you in any of the shots and there are no smiles in any of them.

Also most of your shots are flat, they look like they are shot in midday sun. See if you can go out and shoot in some earlier or later light.

 

^^^^ Thanks for the constructive criticism guys I don't mind, and zippy you're right it was like early afternoon, on a crappy cloudy day.

I thought I was off center and towards the outer thirds in my shots *doh*