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Old Feb 8, 2005 | 01:01 PM
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i did a little sticker design for this korean car forum i often go to.
it's still just "brain storming" stage now,
but i would like to know what you guys think.

it'll be static cling,
so the background will be clear.
3.5 by 3.5 size.

the light grey will be white when it's actually printed,
and the darker grey will be metallic silver.



obviously i looked at suzuka circuit, olympic medal and ferrari wheel a lot,
and also followed some college sticker fonts.
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Old Feb 8, 2005 | 01:14 PM
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Pretty nice but it is a lil busy down in the website area. Maybe do that in red as well. Also scrub the wheel emblem and I think you'll be good.
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Old Feb 8, 2005 | 01:17 PM
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Originally Posted by JayDeeEm' date='Feb 8 2005, 05:14 PM
... Also scrub the wheel emblem and I think you'll be good.
but...i like the horsey....

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Old Feb 8, 2005 | 01:22 PM
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I think it is too busy in general.
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Old Feb 8, 2005 | 01:26 PM
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Originally Posted by seung' date='Feb 8 2005, 02:17 PM
but...i like the horsey....

I agree horses are nice but it's not "Ferrari Car Fan."

Also, I do logo design as a side job (hopefully full-time someday).

Silver and Red are one of my favorite color combos...
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Old Feb 8, 2005 | 01:32 PM
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Originally Posted by JayDeeEm' date='Feb 8 2005, 05:26 PM
... Silver and Red are one of my favorite color combos...
hehe, nike's making us biased, huh?

anyways, thanx, JayDeeEm and ben!
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Old Feb 8, 2005 | 01:47 PM
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I think it's the track in the back (Is that what it is?) that is making it look so busy. I think erasing that would make it look much better.

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Old Feb 8, 2005 | 01:54 PM
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Originally Posted by PsychoBen' date='Feb 8 2005, 02:22 PM
I think it is too busy in general.
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Old Feb 8, 2005 | 01:55 PM
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Looks good! I think it will look less busy when the actual sticker is printed and contrasted with the car's color.
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Old Feb 8, 2005 | 03:59 PM
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Originally Posted by PsychoBen' date='Feb 8 2005, 05:22 PM
I think it is too busy in general.
what's up brother seung.........first off I agree with PB, but at the same time I like all of the content....it just needs to be trimmed some how....I don't really have any ideas off the bat, only what i see and posted about it
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