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Old Jun 11, 2007 | 03:46 PM
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haha we should have sticky for well writting encounters...

i will admit...i put on 'Till I collapse as i read the story even though i dont like eminem and it did add to it.

good kill
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Old Jun 11, 2007 | 06:43 PM
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Nicely written and I love the 3rd person!

I am not an English major.
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Old Jun 11, 2007 | 06:46 PM
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wow i felt like a read a chapter from a book andvwas sitting in the passenger seat.. good kill
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Old Jun 12, 2007 | 06:10 AM
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Damn that was a good story. You should be writing books or something lol.
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Old Jun 12, 2007 | 06:16 AM
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Originally Posted by UMDSuzuka,Jun 10 2007, 07:04 AM
Well written however I initially thought that you chose not to race and the other guy just took off -- because --



With the lack of any names and indefinite pronoun usage it seemed to indicate, to me at least, the Eclipse took off and you had the open road behind you because you chose not to race Anyway, well written
Didnt think he raced either. But still enjoyable. And Jack Johnson is the Sh!t
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Old Jun 12, 2007 | 06:58 AM
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Originally Posted by dnelson1627,Jun 12 2007, 07:16 AM
Didnt think he raced either. But still enjoyable. And Jack Johnson is the Sh!t
<-----not a jack johnson fan. EVERY song sounds the same.
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Old Jun 13, 2007 | 12:25 AM
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we need more threads like this./ hahahaha
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Old Jun 13, 2007 | 11:20 PM
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Originally Posted by dnelson1627,Jun 12 2007, 07:16 AM
Didnt think he raced either. But still enjoyable. And Jack Johnson is the Sh!t
Considering how short notice he wrote this (he called me right after he killed the gts off ), it was pretty good. Thought I agree, I thought he didn't race the guy from the story...I just knew better at the time. Still refreshing tho, kinda caught me off guard since he sounded like a giddy cheerleader when I talked to him about it on the phone.

Him: "Yeah boyee! I just killed a Eclipse GTS, I smoked him fool!"
Judging by that statement over the phone, you guys may realize why I was surprised by his post.
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Old Jun 14, 2007 | 03:26 PM
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i think i just came..
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Old Jun 14, 2007 | 03:53 PM
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you missed a few commas, run ons, verb/subject ownership etc... but i give you an A- for pwning a GTS
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