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Old 05-01-2008, 08:51 PM
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Asking for critiques on some model i did for a project in a week, thanks for the help in advance.


Unfinished swords


Back boots and sheath


front shin guards


Rear sheaths no cloak on


moderate closeup of cloak hinge and breastplate


front


body
Old 05-01-2008, 11:54 PM
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I like everything, but why does the handle of the sword have a hook on it? can you change it so it looks normal? thanks..
Old 05-02-2008, 03:15 AM
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You men always focusing on the breasts



I take it, you're going to achive the fine details for the hair and some of the other areas with a texture?

Looks good but I still like to see it with the textures.
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Originally Posted by RENDERMAN,May 2 2008, 04:15 AM
You men always focusing on the breasts


please make the breastessess a bit bigger.
Old 05-02-2008, 04:27 AM
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I like it... very very creative..
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Nice!
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i dont like the hook on the sword it looks like it might hurt you in a battle. Everything elses looks cool. I Also say you make the tits bigger but put them closer together so it shows the clevage!
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Originally Posted by CrankDatVtec,May 2 2008, 08:29 AM
I Also say you make the tits bigger but put them closer together so it shows the clevage!
Sir, in 3D Animation talk it is called breast augmentation
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Hah yea i can change the hook on the sword i guess, it was designed in the concept as something she would grab and twirl in her hand into position due to the fact that they are upside down.

As for boobies, i dunno if i make her any bigger she may not be the most mobile of assassins hahah

As for textures RENDERMAN yea eventually when i have time ill do it, as of now we have another project hah. Id like to ZBRUSH some detail in and then texture it eventually, she kind of grew on me and i actually kind of like her. I may just redo it all over again and see if it comes out better 2nd pass who knows
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I agree about changing the hooks and upgrading her Breasteses to a little larger

Great job though


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