i posted this poem i wrote in off-topic but since some of you don't ever exit the corner (not that thats a bad thing ) i thought i'd post it here for you guys =p this is one of the final things we are doing for our 8th grade english class is writing an "I am" poem. we have to follow a format (first two words are written for you, you complete the sentence) and i thought i'd like to share it with you S2000 corner guys. if i have any grammatical or spelling errors, or even suggestions, you can post it here! here is my final copy of it:



I am an American-Born-Asian kid who plays the cello and desperately wants a Honda S2000.
I wonder if I will be lucky enough to live another day, or if I will die like the 600,000 soldiers that fought bravely in the Civil War.
I hear the S2000

 

I thought for a moment you were going to come out of the closet!

 

 

 

Nicely done!

 

Very nice

only little thing, take the comma out here "three true, childhood friends"

 

Some very nice sentiments in there

 

 

thanks for sharing Mr. F

hats off to you