no problem blue. im liking that one the best actually! for the gray outline on the hands part, instead of circling it around the whole hands can you indent it? if you know what i mean... outline both claws instead of circling around it if that makes sense. otherwise its great

 

sure...want to change the talons at all?

(no talon change)

 

hmm not really digging how the gray outline is coming over the claws. anyway to make it more sharp? the other one seems to be too round for the whole logo.

talon change? um lets see it!

 

Ok. Out having some beers right now. Check back tomorrow.

 

okay merry christmas eve!

 

OK,
Here are the newest:
changed the path offset in this one..



changed the Talons and path offset in this one..


LMK. Gotta work at the bar tonight But i can get back to it later.

 

i like the 2nd one a lot. just one thing the gray outline... could you try and make it less curvy around the hands and beak part. other than that its awesome

 

 

you see how the gray outlining on the corner of the wings is sharp, can you apply that to the tip of the beak and the hands?

 

bump