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Old 02-09-2009, 10:06 AM
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Sorry, I meant two pictures

I took these in my friends garage, let me know what you think.



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Old 02-10-2009, 06:45 AM
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Cool pics

The first one is nice...I think it could be better if you edited out the reflection of the fluorescent lamps on the bumper.

This is a cool pic too. It would be even better if the aperture were widened a bit to get a wider focus. Currently, focus is limited to a narrow spot on the line between the numbers.
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Old 02-10-2009, 06:49 AM
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Thanks, I purposely left the reflection of the light in there, and I wanted the knob to be a little out of focus to make it a little softer.
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Old 02-10-2009, 07:43 AM
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they are both nicely composed. thumbs up for following fibonacci sequence.

1. I would change the vantage point to get rid of the reflectin as nichigo mentioned. also the sticker? is an eye sore. I like the overall mood of the shot. adding a lil contrast can make it pop even more.

2. I like it. try going little more off center. use that negative space to your advantage.
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Old 02-10-2009, 09:20 AM
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That sticker isn't on the car, I put that on there, so people would know thats my image, I have had a few images borrowed on here without my permission.
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Old 02-10-2009, 09:32 AM
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Originally Posted by Sebrin9k,Feb 10 2009, 10:20 AM
That sticker isn't on the car, I put that on there, so people would know thats my image, I have had a few images borrowed on here without my permission.
lol did you forget that we're on the web? ppl will always cop images on the net.
I'm pretty sure you've copied and pasted a picture that wasn't yours and posted on the forum. as long as they don't sell your images or claim that its their's I think its ok.

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I have seen people claim my pictures as their own before, thats why I did it, I haven't used anyone elses pictures, I always post my own. Thanks again for the comments.
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yea that's a big problem if they claim they shot it. well keep up the good work.
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