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Old 08-30-2010, 01:09 PM
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Good to see you posting here.

Your shots are very clean, and I like the level of contrast, you just have to work on some finer points. #2 is my favorite, of course, I only wish it were a wee bit wider on the left.

Great job!
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Thank you. I feel as though I am steadily improving...now I just need to stop being cheap and go buy a tripod!
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Not bad, continue to work on your compositions. Most of these are on the tight side.
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Composition is by far my biggest challenge, imo. Do you have any suggested reading that could help me? I have considered taking an art class from a local community college. I have read a few books, but they still are not giving me what I need. I feel as though I am still just missing something, and its probably an easy concept.
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Originally Posted by adrs2k,Sep 1 2010, 11:34 AM
Composition is by far my biggest challenge, imo. Do you have any suggested reading that could help me? I have considered taking an art class from a local community college. I have read a few books, but they still are not giving me what I need. I feel as though I am still just missing something, and its probably an easy concept.
Here, this should help.

http://photo.tutsplus.com/tutorials/compos...ic-composition/
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Thanks for that! This has applied to me lately;

"If you take one thing away from this article, remember that composition means so much more than a basic “thirds” grid."

I have been stressing so much on the thirds, that I have been missing the fact there are power lines, or road signs or my exposure is wrong. My biggest fault is still rushing. I need to get my tripod, and SLOW DOWN...take my time fine tuning a shot, instead of rushing around and taking a hundred shots.

In picture 2, do the lines in the road ruined the shot? Could I have played to the lines to increase the power of the shot?


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In photo #2 which IMHO is the best one posted, the lines dont come into play at that angle. All you need to do is roll the car forward a foot and B_I_N_G_O
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