Honda S2000 First Experience

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Oct 31, 2007 | 06:06 PM

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RED MX5

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From: Dry Branch

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Originally Posted by Frankyrocco,Oct 31 2007, 06:57 PM

If you wrote this in HS... how old were you when you graduated?

I don't know about him, but I never actually graduated from high school at all.

Oct 31, 2007 | 07:55 PM

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stevoe88

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From: The Bay, Norcal

First one I drove was a 07 GPW at capital honda. The one I got was a 07 GPW at southbay honda

When I saw it at capital honda, it was so breath taking that at that point I wanted an S2000. Test drove at capital, got a deal at southbay, now i'm driving around in one of the most best cars imo out to date

Nov 1, 2007 | 01:38 AM

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GTS Jeff

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Originally Posted by nightcrawler7188,Oct 30 2007, 08:16 PM

awesome that your first experience inspired you to write all of that!
but the essay is seriously in need of repair. don't make it seem like you're trying as hard and your written voice will come across better

Yep. The better a writer is, the less they'll rely on adjectives to tell their story.

Nov 1, 2007 | 02:36 AM

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From: Gleening the apex

The 1st one I was allowed to drive was a used 00 NFR in the Fall of 2002.

That following summer there was an 03 Berlina in the garage.

Nov 1, 2007 | 05:15 AM

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S2KxPhiLe

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Originally Posted by GTS Jeff,Nov 1 2007, 01:38 AM

Yep. The better a writer is, the less they'll rely on adjectives to tell their story.

true. I could have written it plain and simple but my teacher wanted it to be descriptive using adjectives, sentence combining and variety, etc. I was never a honors english person; I was more of a math whiz.