Dimitry, In addition to Bruce's suggestions the following line should also be edited

Ensured the store and the employees meet and exceed their sale goals on daily bases.

edit to:Ensured the store and the employees meet and exceeded their sales goals on daily basis.

 

For 20% of the gross, I'll start pimping, I mean booking you.

 

how much would you charge if i hired Dimitry out to paint my house

 

Probably a lot.

 

Edit to the edit: Just asking:

Should it read: Ensured the store and the employees met and exceeded their sales goal on a daily basis?

Ensured is past tense, so I'm pretty sure it should it should be met, not meet in that sentence.

Dimitiry, Since I haven't been on a job interview in about 18 years, my advice is probably worth .01 vs the usual .02. One thing I do know, your resume has to be without errors - typing or grammatical. HR people look at resumes with errors and ASSume if you can't take the time to get the resume correct, you might not be a very detail oriented person.

 

the original line was mixing tenses.

 

Those nuns pounded some of that stuff into my head. In most instances, I can't cite the specific rules of grammar, but I get by anyway.

 

I am not an English major either but I have yet to find a circumstance, within the conventional constructs of the English language, where two consecutive commas would be appropriate however.

 

Don't need gunz to get the ladies - just to keep the stalkers away...

 

Good catch! EDITED!!!!

Good thing I'm not typing his resume.